And they rain…!
Far above in the azure skies above,
The clouds cuddle together with lawless love
Snuggling warmly in the care of the other
Cautious enough to hang on to the adored flutter
As they travel across as pure white flakes of snow
And as the mild cold breeze begins to blow
The loved ones nuzzle with reverence clone
close enough for the farsighted to appear lone
The gruesome wind with an envious frozen spite
Rages hard spelling across a grimy gust of fright
For the undying love that the darlings cart
Also prepared, for their dear, to breathe their last
They wrestle hard with the mighty storm
Untiring hopes, and a fervor stunning strong
They clinch tight with all their might
Unprepared to separate, unblemished worship they cite
The sinful gale vies shoddier to move them apart,
Mindful of the sin, the brutal act such tart
It frenzies worse with absolute morality lain
The souls unite, to live their eternal love, and they rain…
The clouds cuddle together with lawless love
Snuggling warmly in the care of the other
Cautious enough to hang on to the adored flutter
As they travel across as pure white flakes of snow
And as the mild cold breeze begins to blow
The loved ones nuzzle with reverence clone
close enough for the farsighted to appear lone
The gruesome wind with an envious frozen spite
Rages hard spelling across a grimy gust of fright
For the undying love that the darlings cart
Also prepared, for their dear, to breathe their last
They wrestle hard with the mighty storm
Untiring hopes, and a fervor stunning strong
They clinch tight with all their might
Unprepared to separate, unblemished worship they cite
The sinful gale vies shoddier to move them apart,
Mindful of the sin, the brutal act such tart
It frenzies worse with absolute morality lain
The souls unite, to live their eternal love, and they rain…
posted by Smita Khanzode at 4:35 AM
5 Comments:
kafi deep thoughts hai aapke clouds ke bare me!!!
nice poem.
Reminded me of highschool days where i used to struggle understand poems like this....always used to curse poets for hiding meaning in their poem :)
:) :) :)
-gopal
Nice thoughts. You are quite good at poetry maam :-) its not easy to find meaningful and rhyming words!!
Keep up the good work!!
Cheers :-)
mind blowing!!!...I used wordweb to knw the meanings of many words in the poem..but every word bestowed my intrest to keep reading on :) well compreheded physics and chemistry of clouds in ryhming words.
The thought is very nice...but which I liked the most is the title of the poem. well done :)
I echo the sentiments in most of the other comments. Bhari hain... kal samjhaana... Explain with examples :)
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